Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing you with reference to my previous application for a management trainee program dated XX September 2005.
Since you asked me to apply again when I am 21 years old, I want to take this opportunity now because I am still very interested in this position.
I have been working in the sales department as a personal assistant until now and I attended additional English courses after work in order to improve my English skills.
I would really appreciate it if you could inform me about the current opportunities in the management trainee program.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Was meinst du denn mit "topical application"?
Ich hoffe, ich konnte dir mit dem Text ein paar Anregungen geben, ansonsten bitte folgende Rechtschreibfehler bei deinem Text ausmerzen:
...I am still [b]interested[/b:12128446b4]...
...I improve[b]d[/b:12128446b4] my [b]English[/b:12128446b4]...